YES AAND YES FOR THE IMPACT AND CONSTRUCTION OF THIS POEM! GREAT JOB, DEVEREAUX
Freezing rain
Bleeding rain
Can’t put out the
Boiling pain
Bleeding pain
Can’t wash away the
Bitter tears
Bleeding tears
Can’t fill the
Empty lakes
Empty praise
Watches the breath fade away
Watching these lives fall away
Can’t fill the crater
Fancy cars and pretty girls can’t fill the crater
Left by the sins of the father
Right by the sins of the mother
Are the angels coming to purify
Are the demons coming to purify
Yes
And no
