A MOMENTS poetic comment–reblogged!

Jonathan Caswell“Pickles and Tarts” — Chapter 6


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Out of the shell!

the tortoise said

out of that hell!the price was paid.

Now I am cold

but not in vain

as I am told

I won the pain!

I can walk free

did nothing wrong

there is no tree

but I stay strong.

I’m a bit old

and just need love

I’ll be a bit bold

and play the dove

.I found a girl

on a dating site

oh, how I swirl

to her I write.

She’s just too young

or I’m too old

but I’ve begun

and now I’m sold.

My name is Frank

and she’s Nicole

I’m not a prank

yet she’s my goal.

Told her the truth

what will she do?

she’s in her youth

and I feel blue.

Difference in age

is not so good

it is a cage

you think I should?

(Poem inspired by poet Newton Ranaweera’s post:

See, we’re free!!: https://newtoneapblog.wordpress.com/2019/02/17/see-were-free/,

and by chapter 6 of Mario Savioni’s novel “Pickles and Tarts”:

https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/12/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-6/)You replied to this comment.

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About Jonathan Caswell

Mr. Caswell has been composing poetry at least since High School. He has been on WORD PRESS for ten years and contributes to two other blogs beside this one. This blog has a Christian emphasis but all bloggers are welcome. Mr. Caswell chooses to---with permission--re[post material of interest

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